Monday, 9 February 2015

The Script



Scene One: / - Interruption
1.       Maggie: Hi, sorry Im late was just doing a bit of shopping.  Went out to buy a top for tonight, got a bit carried away
(Shows bags.)
2.       Natalie:  Hey, no worries. Looks like youve bought quite a bit.
3.       Maggie: Yeah so?  Who cares? Were rich now remember
so, what did you want to talk about?
4.       Natalie: I got you coffee
5.       Maggie: oh thanks
(Pause. Takes a sip of coffee.)
Whats going on Natalie? Youre being really quiet. Its freaking me out.
6.       Natalie: Well
(pause)
Just dont get angry okay?
(pause)
Hannah knows.
7.       Maggie: What?
Knows what?
8.       Natalie: Everything. Shes going to the police.
9.       Maggie: Everything!? Youve got to be fucking kidding me. How could you let this happen?
How did she find out?
10.   Natalie: I dont know, she just guessed. /
11.   Maggie: Fuck. Fuck.
12.   Natalie: Maggie please, we can fix this right?
You can talk to her yeah? convince her to keep quiet?
13.   Maggie: Pull yourself together Natalie, We arent going to do anything. Youre going to fix this mess youve created.
14.   Natalie: But Maggie /
15.   Maggie: Seriously you better fix this
Or I will.






Scene Two
(Phone rings)
Caller: (Soft sobbing)
16.   Natalie: Hello?
(Pause)
Hello?
Caller:
(two gunshots)
17.   Problem Solved.
(hangs up)

Storyboard Plan



Storyboard: Shot by Shot Breakdown

Natalie tells Maggie about her sister and Maggie is furious, she refuses to go back to the life she had before, saying to Natalie “If you don’t fix this problem, I will”. Natalie struggles through the day terrified that any minute the police could burst through her door. When she is cooking dinner the phone rings, she answers and immediately hears two gun shots followed by the words “Problem solved”. Instantly believing her sister has been shot she breaks down.

1)            LS of Café, resting on Natalie sitting at a table. (Pan)  - 4 seconds.
2)            ECU of Natalie’s mouth, biting her nails. (Stationary) – 3 second.
3)            LS of Natalie, sitting looking nervous, at a table in a café waiting for Maggie. (Slight sideways track) – 3 seconds.
4)            OTS from behind Natalie as Maggie enters and sits down holding lots of designer bags and greeting Natalie, positive and talking about what she’s bought. (Stationary) – 5 seconds.
5)            CU of Natalie faking a smile as Maggie sits down. (Stationary) – 3 second.
6)            Two shot LS, slightly OTS from behind Natalie. As they continue to sit down holding lots of designer bags and greeting Natalie, positive and talking about what she’s bought.  (Stationary) – 5 seconds. *L1
7)            MCU of Natalie talking. (Slight zoom) – 3 seconds. *L2
8)            MCU of Maggie talking. (Stationary) –  3 seconds. *L3
9)            CU shot of Natalies hands, she’s nervously playing with them. (Stationary) – 2 second. *L4
10)         MS of her looking at coffee (Stationary) – 3 second *L4
11)         CU shot of coffee (stationary) – 2 second
12)         MS of Maggie, picking up coffee and taking a sip (Tracking her  movement) – 5 seconds *L5
13)         MS of Natalie (Stationary) – 3 seconds *L6

14)         MS of Maggie (Stationary) – 3 seconds *L7

15)         MS of Natalie (Stationary) – 3 seconds *L8

16)         MS of Maggie (Stationary) – 3 seconds *L9

17)         MS of Natalie (Stationary) – 3 seconds *L10

18)         MS of Maggie (Stationary) – 3 seconds *L11

19)         MS of Natalie (Slight movement) – 3 seconds *L12

20)         MS of Maggie(Slight movement) – 3 seconds *L13

21)         MS of Natalie (Stationary) – 3 seconds *L14

22)         CU of Maggie (Stationary) – 5 seconds *L15
23)         LS of Maggie leaving coffee shot whilst Natalie sits and looks extremely nervous. (Stationary) – 5 seconds.

24)         MS Natalie in car attempts to phone Hannah, no answer. (Answer Machine plays over the top of shot.) (Stationary) – 5 seconds.
25)         MS Natalie in Sainsbury’s attempts to phone Hannah, no answer. (Answer Machine plays over the top of shot.) (Stationary) – 5 seconds.
26)         MS Natalie walking the dog attempts to phone Hannah, no answer. (Answer Machine plays over the top of shot.) (Stationary) – 5 seconds.

27)         LS of Natalie in Kitchen chopping vegetables with glass of wine. Phone rings. (Slight Track) – 5 seconds.

28)         CU of phone screen reading “Incoming Call Hannah”. (Stationary) – 2 second.

29)         ECU of hand placing phone to ear. (Stationary) – 2 seconds.

30)         CU of Natalie, hears soft sobbing, speaking on the phone (Stationary) – 3 seconds. *L16

31)         LS of Natalie when first gunshot is fired. (Slight movement) – 2 second

32)         CU of Natalie hearing second gunshot (Slight movement) – 4 second

33)         ECU of Lips speaking into phone (Stationary) – 4 seconds. *L17

Fade to black.

34)         “1 year earlier” appears on screen. – 3 seconds.



We have highlighted where we plan to have our shot reverse shot sequence.
The *L references to a line from the script.

Friday, 6 February 2015

What Rating Is Our Sequence?

We have chosen to rate our film a 15. As we have some strong language in our sequence and in the film as a whole there is likely to be strong violence. 

What might I see in a 15 rated film or video?

Any of the following:
  •   strong violence
  •  frequent strong language (e.g. 'f***').
  •   portrayals of sexual activity
  •   strong verbal references to sex
  •   sexual nudity
  •   brief scenes of sexual violence or verbal references to sexual violence
  •   discriminatory language or behaviour
  •   drug taking

Tuesday, 3 February 2015

Film Synopsis



Maggie and Natalie are young women working for ‘Pineapple’ an English Multinational Corporation headquartered in London, which designs, develops, and sells consumer electronics, computer software, online services, and personal computers.  After working there for 5 years Natalie has earned the trust of her co-workers and often deals with many of the companies digressions as well as dealing with the company finances. Natalie gains no credit despite the hard work she does, besides perhaps the occasional thanks from her boss who relishes in all the profits. Maggie however after only 6 months decides she’s had enough of her small apartment and cheap clothes and manages to manipulate and convince Natalie that she deserves more than occasional thanks. Together they embezzle millions, at first everything is great, they get designer clothes, new cars, move into luxury Chelsea apartments. Suddenly everything starts to fall apart as Hannah, Natalie’s sister, becomes suspicious and eventually realises what they have been doing. Hannah threatens to go to the police if the money isn’t returned to company as she believes what they have done is morally wrong.
Natalie tells Maggie about her sister and Maggie is furious, she refuses to go back to the life she had before, saying to Natalie “If you don’t fix this problem, I will”. Natalie struggles through the day terrified that any minute the police could burst through her door. When she is cooking dinner the phone rings, she answers and immediately hears two gun shots followed by the words “Problem solved”. Instantly believing her sister has been shot she breaks down. 
Angry and confused she goes to the police and confess’. Yet the police don’t believe Natalie’s story telling her how earlier a young lady (Maggie) had come in and told them everything.
Maggie had blamed everything on Natalie, showing various documents signed by Natalie to support her statements Maggie explained she hadn’t come forward with information sooner as she was afraid of being implicated. Natalie is arrested and sentenced to 10 years in prison. As she’s arrested she walks past the interview room and sees her sister alive and standing with Maggie comforting her. We then discover that after Hannah threatened to go to the police, Maggie visited her, explaining how they could split the money and leave Natalie with the blame convincing her to keep quiet. The final sequence is Maggie and Hannah driving out of London laughing in an brand new Porsche.



The highlighted section is what will be using as our opening sequence.



What kinds of stories and characters appeal to your target audience?


Our action thriller is going to be targeted at 15-24 year-olds who are mainly female as our protagonists and antagonists are going to be ‘glamorous’ females with alluring makeup and costumes. This generally attracts women as they aspire to be like the women in the film, as well as relating to the as fellow females. This could also attract a male audience as they would like the action as well as be attracted to the women. In our film, there are going to be suggestions to weapons such as knives and firearms as well as actually having them shown in the film. Although we are only creating the opening sequence and not the whole film, there will still be references to these props. This again attracts the male audience for the action element. Our thriller could also fit into the crime genre too as there will be direct references to embezzlement and theft in the workplace.



Allocated Tasks

Each member of our group has an allocated role in both the planning and production of our short film. For more information on each of these roles please click the link 'Allocated Tasks'

Story Boarding Artist: Ella
Director of Filming: Ella
Casting Director: Ella

Make Up Artist: Folly
Prop Manager: Folly

Location Scout & Planner: Naomi 
Costume Manager: Naomi


Camera Operators: Folly and Naomi