The camera fades from black to a darkly lit room with a single chair in the frame. The diegetic sound that is footsteps come into earshot as a man, Danny Ocean, comes into frame and sits down. He is wearing slightly grey clothing, which shows the spectator that he is a prisoner in this prison. His body language as he sits down suggests that he is confident in this situation he is in now as he sits with his legs slightly open, leaning back on the chair and is holding his hands contently together. An offscreen voice states that the reason he has been brought to this room is to determine whether or not he is likely to break the law again if he was released. This sparks the spectator's attention and gives them a chance to think about why he was arrested in the first place, and why they are willing to release him. The same offscreen voice then states that this man has been involved in several frauds in the past, though never charged for them. Danny repeats what she said about him never being charged for these frauds confidently and smoothly, as if he knows he will be released in the end.

diegetic sound of keys and gates ....
ReplyDeletegood Naomi - you are using terms like dialogue and offscreen well.
Sorry Folly.
ReplyDeleteAdd screen grabs.